Book Review: Uncrowned

DON ARMADO: Assist me, some extemporal god of rhyme, for I am sure I shall turn  sonnet. Devise, wit; write, pen; for I am for whole volumes in folio. 

—Shakespeare, Love’s Labour’s Lost (1.2.189-91) 

If he writes her a few sonnets, he loves her. If he writes her 300 sonnets, he loves  sonnets. 

—English professor at Stony Brook University 

*Please note: this review contains plot spoilers. 

Ian McEwan’s novel What We Can Know (2025) has an enticing, high concept premise: a scholar in the early twenty-second century is trying to  track down a remarkable sequence of poems from 2014, before modern  civilization was destroyed by “The Derangement,” global warming, world  wars, and cataclysmic flooding. What We Can Know, however, doesn’t  realize its promise: it is actually quite frustrating and disappointing. 

Part 1 is narrated by Tom Metcalfe, a middle-aged academic, who in  2119 is ensconsed on one of the small islands that now comprise the British  archipelago. Along with his partner Rose Church, he is seeking the  whereabouts of a notorious, unpublished work of poetry. That would be “A  Corona for Vivien” by Francis Blundy, written for his wife’s 54th birthday in  2014. He recited it to her and their guests at the dinner party celebration  held at their place in the English countryside, The Barn. A century later, despite the devastating upheavals the world has undergone, archival  libraries have survived or been resurrected, along with access to the  journals, emails, text messages, and other ephemera of earlier times (that  is, the tracks left by our contemporaries), so research is possible. 

It should be said that the future world-building is uneven at best. The  contrasts between our own zesty, maximalist, destructive lifestyles and the  more austere, lowkey, responsible existence imagined for the post apocalypse, though, provide some food for thought. Also, several real  people are mentioned from modern times, as well as made-up literary  figures from the future. For example, a character states that Frank Kermode (1919-2010), a real twentieth-century literary critic, has written effusive  praise of Blundy, and the grammarians Fowler and Pinker are cited in  passing, while in the future everyone has read the outstanding novels of the  imaginary Mabel Fisk.  

Part 2 turns out to be Vivien’s brutally candid, secret, hidden diary,  discovered by Tom and Rose after they decipher a clue she left behind. It  substantially revises received understanding of her life, marriages, and  milieu. It also reveals that she destroyed the unique holograph manuscript  of the poems composed in her honor. 

McEwan is an award-winning British author whose prizes include a  Booker, and several of his novels have been made into prestigious films.  Some bits of What We Can Know hit the mark: an argument between the  pedantic poet and a friendly local handyman over “hopefully” as sentence  adverb; or Tom’s mindset during his research quest, swinging around  between despair, exhaustion, and exhilaration, for instance. 

The thematic issues about literary history signalled by the title also  inherently interest me and other littérateurs. How much imagination,  supposition, even fabulation goes into fleshing out the past, or indeed the  life, of any quirky, inconsistent, human subject? What methodological rules apply? What epistemological cruxes arise? Tom’s attempts to shed light on  our era enact such questions in somewhat “meta” ways. They are occasionally ironized by Vivien’s (subjective) recollections that appear later,  such as when she confesses in her journal that her favourites in the memoir  genre include Samuel Pepys and Alan Clark, who were not “afraid of letting  the world know they could be calculating liars, greedy, selfish, vain and  disagreeable.” Certainly in that regard, the novel overall is not wholly  unsuccessful. 

The conceit (or MacGuffin) the novel builds around, though, creates  insurmountable problems. Francis Bundy, the leading poet of his age, has  produced his masterpiece: a linked series of fifteen Petrarchan sonnets. (A  corona series entails using the last line of the previous sonnet as the  opening of the next, culminating in a return to the opening line. It is,  needless to say, a very demanding, hence uncommon, format. There are a  few examples from the Renaissance and more recent times, such as John  Fuller’s “Marston Meadows: a Corona for Prue,” which McEwan said partly  inspired his novel. John Donne’s justly well-known sequence of seven religious poems, “La Corona,” is mentioned; Lady Mary Wroth’s group of  fourteen, “A Crown of Sonnets Dedicated to Love,” also from the early  seventeenth century, is not.) Blundy himself believes he has triumphed: as  he jots in his notebook: “Concede the fact. My fifteen are superior to John  Donne’s humble seven”! In the novel, the entire corona is recited by the  author at the boozy birthday party hosted by Francis and Vivien and  attended by eight guests, but it is not transcribed verbatim. One guest,  Harry Kitchener, is Francis’s long-standing editor; his wife is Jane, Francis’s sister. The others present are civilians. They mostly liked the verse, and left  somewhat vague recollections. Structurally, McEwan faces the dilemma of  either paraphrasing the “Corona for Vivien” in enough detail to reveal its  brilliance or actually including an amazing 210 lines of moving verse with  strict meter and rhyme scheme. The solution, having Vivien destroy it later  that night in a fit of pique, is deeply unsatisfying. It also strains credulity  that a vain older poet, highly concerned with this status and fame, would  destroy all other copies and refuse publication, even posthumously, and  that Vivien would be so spiteful that she too would not even leave a copy  for posterity. 

Besides that, Tom and Rose, Vivien and Francis, just aren’t all that  interesting; the latter two are both fairly unlikeable without being  fascinating. 

Yet don’t despair, Gentle Reader! Two twentieth-century English  masterpieces can salve your wounds: Arcadia by Tom Stoppard (1993) and  Pale Fire by Vladimir Nabokov (1962).1(Other works of fiction play with the  tropes juggled by McEwan as well.) Arcadia is a play with scenes split  between the early 1800s and the late 1900s. In the present, scholars are  visiting a great country house in Derbyshire, trying to figure out what  transpired there earlier; their scenes alternate with ones set in the past  when we witness the key events unfold. (The resident aristocrats, members  of the Coverly family, appear in both eras.) The drama is very clever, very  witty, and ultimately very poignant. Pale Fire the novel consists of a fascinating 999-line poem in heroic couplets, “Pale Fire” by John Shade, along with the extensive, insanely misguided commentary by his  acquaintance Charles Kinbote, published after the fictional author’s  untimely demise. It’s a wholly original tour de force; one of the most  ingenius masterpieces of fiction. (It also contains some winking anti-Lolita  easter eggs.) 

As always, lege feliciter! Happy reading! 

1 The brilliant playwright Sir Tom Stoppard passed away last month at the age of 88.

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